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现在学生学习的科目比较多,而主要学习的还是三大主科英语、数学、语文,而很多人都知道在语文的分数上面,如果作文写的好则整体分数不会太差。

但是如果作文不是很好的学生,可能这一项就会这个科目的整体分数落下来。

现在的学生见识比较多,相比较很多90后上学的时候写作文的时候闭门造车会好很多。但是当学生接触的内容越来越多,写作呈现的内容就会比较多元化。

作文中的内容一般都是与真实生活不相上下的,但现在很多学生接触的除了现实生活中的东西,还有很多网络的内容。但是不管怎样,呈现在作文中都应该是积极向上的。

因为学生现在很多都是00后了,对于新鲜事物接触后的理解能力也不一样,但多数教师的思想还是以保守为主的,所以当这些新鲜事物呈现在作文中的时候,老师的意见也不一样。

学生作文《我和芙宁娜》得分网友热议,老师:标准不同而已

当学生与“早恋”扯上关系的时候,很多人认为无论是什么情境,都是不可取的,尤其出现在作文中,有的老师甚至直接就给了零分,老师直接说是“三观不正”,另一位老师也只是勉强给了个及格分数。

而出现这种情况的,不只是这一篇文章,下面这几篇作文,教师也只是给出了勉强的及格分数,个别教师觉得甚至应该是零分。

一篇名字是《某某,我心中的最爱》的作文,小作者讲述的是对于同性感情的认可,还呼吁社会去关注这个集体。而这个小作者只是表述自己的观点,其实从这个角度去看并没有什么。

而这篇作文的标题要求是“我心中的最爱”,这篇文章小作者在写作的时候也并没有偏题,但是教师觉得内容不适合出现在作文中,所以就给了低分。

相信很多90后在写作文的时候也遇到过,标题是我的好朋友的命题作文。一般那时候写作的时候都会写自己亲密无间每天一起上下学的朋友,或者是有些比较好的朋友但因为父母工作原因离开身边,表达思念的。

但是现在的学生因为接触的东西比较多,所以当他们写我的好朋友的时候,则会出现很多新鲜的元素,例如琴、可莉等出自《原神》的人物,老师没有给高分是因为担心学生沉迷游戏。

而小学的作文通常出现的还会有另外一个命题就是“我和某某的一天”。

90后父母当学生的时候写作可能通常会写的就是“我和妈妈的一天”“我和奶奶的一天”,可能有些学生家里有宠物的会写“我和小狗的一天”,但是现在的学生写的则不一样了。

很多会出现“我和孙悟空的一天”等写神话人物的,还有的会写明星、科学家的,这些都比较能接受,但是当作文题目中写到“我和芙宁娜的一天”。

作文里面写的是芙宁娜带她看枫丹美景,写到了长满蒲公英的湖心岛、柔软的海滩还有花海。对于景色的描述非常细腻,因此老师给出了还算不错的分数。

但是有的学生则表示自己的老师不会给高分,因为作文中的人物并不是真实存在的人物,这样写老师会觉得没有积极性,文章没有中心思想。

对于一些文章教师的想法不一样,部分教师还是觉得应该写些平常生活中的人物,不应该过多的把动漫或者是游戏里面的人物代入到作文中。

但是如果写些科学家、文学家等“大众素材”就比较受认可,但是当出现一些“小众的素材”很多人则表示不太认可。

时代不同了,对于学生的观点要辩证的看,不能一概而论

现在的学生多数是00后,接触的东西以及现在社会的环境和以前90后的时代不一样了,所以对于学生的作文中出现些新颖的题材也要辩证的看,不能一概而论。

老师对于作文的批判,看的是学生是否围绕中心思想,题材是否典型、是否有中心思想,逻辑是否严谨、思想态度是不是端正的

而在作文中的主题不应该只是写大众的素材,当小众素材出现的时候,只要中心思想是正确的,描述的内容是积极的,教师都应该给予正常的分数。

作文是语文科目中占比分数比较高的一项,如何能够取得高分作文,尤其是在大考的时候例如小升初、中考、高考等考试中,学生还是要多听听老师的建议的。

在这种比较重要的考试中,在个人“喜欢”和合适之间一定要做出正确的选择。

话题:你怎么看待学生的作文选题?

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